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Fallen Friends

Author: DrunkOnShadows
ASL Info:    16/F/Ont
Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 66 /84 /49
Words: 40
Class/Type: Poetry /Nature
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Fallen Friends

Down, down and around,
Wistfully, autumn leaves fall
And join fallen friends

Crunch, crunch, people walk
On dead and lifeless brown leaves
That lay helplessly

Snowflakes fall so gentle,
Lightly cover fallen friends,
May they rest in peace

Submitted on 2007-01-15 19:50:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I love this piece!!! It's short and simple, but speaks volumes, at least to me it does, the whole second verse is what does it for me,

"Crunch, crunch, people walk
On dead and lifeless brown leaves
That lay helplessly"

Oh, visually that is stunning. Great job!!!!
| Posted on 2007-01-17 00:00:00 | by Lil gal | [ Reply to This ]

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