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    dots Submission Name: Tortured Desiresdots

    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsTortured Desiresdots

    Wanting but not having
    Seeking yet not finding
    Coming close but not touching
    Desires felt yet not fulfilled

    Tempted but not pleased
    Aroused yet not sated
    Lips puckered but not kissed
    Passions stirred but not mixed

    Dreams dreamed but not awakened
    Eyes plead yet not seen
    Heart beats but not felt
    Body shivers yet not warmed

    Hands reach but not held
    Words whispered yet not heard
    Fantasies born but not nurtured
    Desires scream as they are tortured

    Submitted on 2007-01-15 20:25:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like this piece, for me its the description of earths balance we find ourselves locked in,
    but i hope you find the something else that i know exists.

    good write, love it.
    | Posted on 2007-01-17 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]
      wow stacey~I really like this one~addin it to my faves!! keep up the great work!! :)
    | Posted on 2007-01-16 00:00:00 | by DesecratedDream | [ Reply to This ]

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