this is amazing. this is describing me right now. i want to run away...to where? who knows? from where?....can't remember. just as long as im running away.
as i was reading this, i felt it all. your timing for posting this piece is perfect.
i enjoyed this, i totally relate to these feelings.
the flow and pace of this piece is excellent. imagery is great too. as i said, i imagined this was me, i could see it! lol
my fav part ~
'With every step
her heart races inside her stifled chest
where her feelings,
once bursting to break free
are harbered by neglect'
i'm adding this one to my favs.