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    dots Submission Name: Night's Pledge to his Lady (Keatsian Ode)dots
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    Author: Peggy Paris
    ASL Info:    61/F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    4.11 - 746/567/167
    Words: 264
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 183
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    Description:
       The form used for this poem is called the Keatsian Ode. It is constructed using iambic pentameter; and, as a general rule, there are three verses with the following rhyme scheme: ababcdecde fgfghijhij klklmnomno - ten lines per verse, and the verses should not be internonnected with rhyme at all.


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    dotsNight's Pledge to his Lady (Keatsian Ode)dots
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    KNIGHT’S PLEDGE TO HIS LADY

    Lest not a day shall pass without your smile,
    My heart has carved its image deep inside.
    ‘Twill be your happy face that shall beguile
    My thoughts and dreams at night, my dearest bride.
    Your laughing eyes as blue as azure sea
    Reflect the way my love has reached its height
    And touched the heavens clouds in softest kiss.
    Your charms have captured heart and soul of me;
    I long to hold your body through the night
    And feel forever-warm embrace of bliss.

    Today I wed the one I so do love;
    And, with these words, I vow to honor you.
    My sweet, we both shall fly on wings of doves
    For never has there been a love so true.
    Do take my hand; I offer it in trust.
    My heart is yours; it sings today in joy.
    You bring into my life the brightest sun.
    Until the day my body turns to dust,
    These feelings I’ll, with love and care, deploy.
    This ring I give to you, my dearest one.

    Like evening stars that brightly fill the sky,
    So shall our years together intertwine.
    Your wants and needs are mine to satisfy;
    Our love shall age through time like finest wine.
    The two of us shall be but one in whole.
    My lady love, I tender you this pledge.
    My heart shall beat with yours in true accord.
    Your love has found its place within my soul,
    And never shall emotion lose its edge
    For I’m forever blessed by its reward.




    Submitted on 2007-01-16 12:36:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      standing ovations from me , beautiful love poem,i think you have mastered this one perfectly, the rhyming excellent, it reads so smooothly, honestly
    gerry
    | Posted on 2007-01-17 00:00:00 | by bogeyman | [ Reply to This ]
      Amazing, and truly amazing! Wow..this seems like an incredible hard thing to write, but you totally did it unfailingly. Wonderful.
    | Posted on 2007-01-16 00:00:00 | by blue_pixie_dust | [ Reply to This ]
      i have to agree, the way you described this makes it sound real hard to do. but you certainly nailed it.
    beautiful flow and rhyme. and the words are so pretty!! makes me want to float away.....so very romantic.

    truly beautiful piece. worthy of applause...i stand and applaud you
    michelle
    | Posted on 2007-01-16 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, this seems difficult! You have mastered it with skill and grace, and this poem offers a beautiful ode to love and marriage! Brilliant, Sharon!
    | Posted on 2007-01-16 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]



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