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    dots Submission Name: Love growsdots
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    Author: Raineyes
    ASL Info:    19/f/AR
    Elite Ratio:    4.74 - 208/187/46
    Words: 163
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       Ok this is a sestina that I wrote while I was pregnant in 2006 in creative writing class. I didn't know the gender of the baby then but I can tell you now that she is 9 months old it's a girl and she's healthy and happy and beautiful.


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    dotsLove growsdots
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    The light grew
    radiating from insaide
    a heart filled with love
    and with it the baby,
    soft like the light, beautiful
    essence of need.

    This is all that's needed,
    love.
    With this it will grow
    becoming bright and beautiful
    but inside
    it will always be my baby.

    "Baby?"
    His voice filled with love
    instilling me with a need.
    In it I will grow
    like the one inside.
    "You are beautiful."

    And in a breath, beautiful
    will be inside
    left to grow
    meeting every need
    my baby
    will know love.

    Everything will be love
    and in love, love will grow
    into something, like the baby
    that will be beautiful
    getting everything it needs
    feeling happy on the inside.

    And on the inside
    I and it and he will know love.
    A family, beautiful.
    That is what is needed.
    All for my baby!
    GROW. . .

    Inside it will grow.
    With love, we'll meet its needs.
    My beautiful baby!




    Submitted on 2007-01-16 17:25:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Ahhh, this is so sweet. I don't remember seing this side of my ex when she was pregnant. This had so much purity to it, love, hope, strength,,etc. It really is amazing. A few things though. Now that you know your baby's a girl, I'd change the "his" stuff. Also, from what I know this isn't a sestina, it may have been inspired, but from what I can tell it doesn't match. Personally, I find that irrelovant in the big scheme of things though. Congratualtions, on a happy, beautiful baby girl! and a lovely write
    | Posted on 2007-01-17 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]



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