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Damaged


Author: _Phoenix
ASL Info:    18/F/FL
Elite Ratio:    4.56 - 46 /31 /21
Words: 94
Class/Type: Poetry /Death
Total Views: 1398
Average Vote:    5.0000
Bytes: 611



Description:


written while feeling slightly morbid. i was having a bad day ^_^
enjoy. - Phoenix


Damaged



Shake me
Break me
Take me apart
Love me
Hate me
Shred up my heart
Cause me pain and agony
Torture
Anguish
Please kill me.
Take my soul, my essence of heart
Mutate
Suffocate
Rip it apart
Make my own gush from my mouth
Stab my gut just kill me now
Go ahead and take my life
Skew me with a serrated knife
My voice will haunt you after I'm dead
You'll see my face inside your head
Just pretend as if I never bled
While it flows from my stomach, crimson red.




Submitted on 2007-01-16 18:03:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  wow this is good i can really feel how bad of a day you were having, just how badly you wanteds it all to end, and and never be reminded it, never have to deal with it. Evrybody well almost everybody is faced with these days i have been faced with one just recently and i almost killred myself i know how you feel and im right up there with you

xXxKOHLxXx
| Posted on 2007-01-19 00:00:00 | by panzyrocker | [ Reply to This ]
  This piece is awsome!
I love how you write make more like this.
~Audrey
| Posted on 2007-01-16 00:00:00 | by nightxassassin | [ Reply to This ]
  i think the ending of poems in the most important part and i love when you walk away with that feeling of awe. your poem just did that to me.

the rest of the poem was good. good flow a rhyme patern. keep up the good work

J. Ackson Jr.
| Posted on 2007-01-16 00:00:00 | by JAcksonJr | [ Reply to This ]
  i like the rhyming and the flow, this would make a good song.
| Posted on 2007-01-16 00:00:00 | by Lil gal | [ Reply to This ]


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