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    dots Submission Name: Secret Placedots
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    Author: blue_pixie_dust
    ASL Info:    16 female
    Elite Ratio:    2.52 - 42/36/22
    Words: 253
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 179
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    Description:
       I have three sisters, so this poem kind of symbolizes the way we would have been when we were younger if we grew up in a place where imaginations can run wild. We grew up in the city, but we still had large imaginations. This poem is about three sisters who play together, dance, and imagine anything they want.


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    dotsSecret Placedots
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    Meet me in our secret place
    Meet me in our hiding spot
    Where we can trace
    Our wildest thoughts

    Meet me in our secret place
    All the way out by the old oak tree
    With a sack of old, silky lace
    To cover our faces by that tree

    Meet me in our secret place
    That place where our imaginations flow
    To worlds we never knew we could see face to face
    Worlds where the light seems like it forever glows

    Our secret place is where we’ll go
    So we can dance in the moonlit snow
    Together, and hand in hand
    My sisters and I will dance

    Meet me in our secret place
    Where joy will stand above that willowy oak
    We’ll dress up in our secret place
    Long, elegant dresses and short, woolly cloaks

    We’ll live forever in that secret place
    You and I, we will
    We’ll grow old in that secret place
    Until our imaginations still

    Meet me in our secret place
    Meet me in our hiding spot
    Where we can trace
    Our wildest thoughts




    Submitted on 2007-01-16 18:25:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I think it's marvelous! Me and my sister did grow up in a place where our imaginations could just go insane...and they often did.

    "Meet me in our secret place
    That place where our imaginations flow
    To worlds we never knew we could see face to face
    Worlds where the light seems like it forever glows"

    It sounds just like something from my childhood...
    | Posted on 2007-01-16 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]



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