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    dots Submission Name: Your personal Aphrodisiacdots
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    Author: the_truth
    ASL Info:    15/f/usa
    Elite Ratio:    3.87 - 25/21/21
    Words: 167
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 142
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1065



    Description:
       I've wanted to do something with sexuality for sometime now.


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    January 16, 2007


    Your personal Aphrodisiac

    What draws you to me
    Is it the desire of what cannot become a flaw
    Would seducing you be the key
    Could you handle what you just saw

    Arousing is this illusion
    Is being attracted sinful and wrong
    This test is full of confusion
    You taste what you want; yet you just move along

    Taste is the deceit
    Obscures from your contemplative thoughts of despair
    I fear we can never meet
    When you come looking, I will not be there

    One chaste touch of an innocent lie
    The feel of sweated skin against skin
    The peak of the moment you thrust and fly
    With all the loveless moments none will bear kin


    Hide from the peasants of pain
    This sexuality will be never ending
    The deadly supplement that will have you calling my sweet name
    Your personal aphrodisiac that will have you pretending








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    ||| Comments |||
      I think this is quite clever..that is if Im understanding it correctly..what im getting is that this guy is really attracted to you, u have a sexual relationship but its nothing more than that for him..just sex

    i like this stanza:

    Arousing is this illusion
    Is being attracted sinful and wrong
    This test is full of confusion
    You taste what you want; yet you just move along

    this applies to alot of people unfortunately..

    good write..peace and love
    | Posted on 2007-01-17 00:00:00 | by foxy lee | [ Reply to This ]



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