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    dots Submission Name: My Favorite things to dodots
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    Author: Jeniffer
    ASL Info:    18/f/earth
    Elite Ratio:    5.76 - 240/279/81
    Words: 255
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
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       Really...I'm not a lazy jerk..this poem has nothing to do with real life....really. * eyes dart around nervously*


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    dotsMy Favorite things to dodots
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    Coming home
    and sitting down
    and eating bananas
    that have turned all brown
    is one of my favorite things to do.

    The quiet corner,
    where the big books are
    where i can sit real still
    and travel far
    is one of my favorite places to go

    Kicking my shoes
    onto the floor
    dropping my coat
    when I walk in the door
    never fails to thrill

    Sometimes I notice
    the dishes need doing
    but it's not like they have
    anywhere to be going
    so I always sit back and chill

    Sometimes I frown
    at a voice in my head
    it's never quite clear,
    but I think that it said
    I should try and get something done

    I dunno,
    it's probably right,
    but the mess has never
    given me fright
    I guess I'd rather have fun

    Putting my feet
    up on the table
    and searching
    for something good on cable
    is how I exercise

    The clutter's become
    quite cozy, I've found
    who cares of nobody
    comes around?
    My best friends are the flies.

    You're not likely
    to see me get up today
    it's hard to change your life,
    they say
    and I'm stuck to this couch like glue

    The only problem
    with coming home
    is listening to mother
    moan and groan
    "Look at this mess! What's wrong with you?!"




    That is NOT my favorite thing to do.





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      The only problem
    with coming home
    is listening to mother
    moan and groan
    "Look at this mess! What's wrong with you?!"




    That is NOT my favorite thing to do.

    thats amazing jennifer...
    | Posted on 2007-05-27 00:00:00 | by Shaza | [ Reply to This ]
      Another nice poem of yours, Jeniffer! You can get right to the point and make your poems so interesting. I must say that your Mom would have quite a tough time with all that mess, though! ; ) ; ) Good Write!
    | Posted on 2007-03-21 00:00:00 | by mdsouza | [ Reply to This ]
      This poem made me smile. I have to run to the store tonight and pick up some essentials and fill my car with gas. Reading this makes me want to just put that off and "sit back and chill" all night instead. :) I liked it.
    | Posted on 2007-01-18 00:00:00 | by pick a locke | [ Reply to This ]


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