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    dots Submission Name: Revenge Part Idots
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    Author: BrokenAngel
    ASL Info:    19/F/MI
    Elite Ratio:    3.91 - 178/156/47
    Words: 152
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 144
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    dotsRevenge Part Idots
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    Falling down like acid rain
    I hear you cry again
    Your pain warms me now
    This is where my revenge begins

    Torturing not the physical body
    I've warped your mind
    There is no future for you now
    There is only me

    When pain turns to pleasure
    I'll leave you to weep
    You'll fall to the ground farther that I did
    This is how I'll make you pay

    Bringing you closer to the depths
    I laugh as you stumble and fall
    And I lift you slowly to your knees
    Your eyes following with sweet and tender--

    I take you to the edge
    Showing you how far down you'll fall
    But you don't see
    This is where I've planned your end

    Turning you for a poisoned kiss
    I swear youll die upon this cliff
    With the hateful scars of memories
    Face down you'll float on dark red seas




    Submitted on 2007-01-17 10:03:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow, I would hate to be ur enemy. I can feel the hate radiating from this write.
    | Posted on 2007-01-17 00:00:00 | by Lil gal | [ Reply to This ]



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