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Submission Name:
Revenge Part I
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Author:
BrokenAngel
ASL Info:
19/F/MI
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3.91 - 178/156/47
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152
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Poetry/
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anything goes like rock and roll.
Revenge Part I
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Falling down like acid rain
I hear you cry again
Your pain warms me now
This is where my revenge begins
Torturing not the physical body
I've warped your mind
There is no future for you now
There is only me
When pain turns to pleasure
I'll leave you to weep
You'll fall to the ground farther that I did
This is how I'll make you pay
Bringing you closer to the depths
I laugh as you stumble and fall
And I lift you slowly to your knees
Your eyes following with sweet and tender--
I take you to the edge
Showing you how far down you'll fall
But you don't see
This is where I've planned your end
Turning you for a poisoned kiss
I swear youll die upon this cliff
With the hateful scars of memories
Face down you'll float on dark red seas
Submitted on 2007-01-17 10:03:23
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Wow, I would hate to be ur enemy. I can feel the hate radiating from this write.
| Posted on 2007-01-17 00:00:00 | by
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