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    dots Submission Name: Lightningbladedots
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    Author: Uthmaan
    ASL Info:    11/M/Texas
    Elite Ratio:    1.83 - 44/33/7
    Words: 20
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 854
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    Bytes: 160



    Description:
       I wrote this poem for darkrose16.


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    dotsLightningbladedots
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    Lightningblade, O Lightningblade
    How sweet it sounds
    How bad it pains

    Lightningblade, O Lightningblade
    How I envy your pain.




    Submitted on 2007-01-17 19:44:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Dude! Man . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . you just keep gettin better and better. I can't believe you actually wrote this. It is truly amazing. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . You better right some more stuff little man. It's what you're good at. Keep 'em comin. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Keep 'em comin. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .


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    | Posted on 2007-04-12 00:00:00 | by SilentDreams42 | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey good stuff lil bro. u should do a poem for each attack. that would be tight.
    | Posted on 2007-01-17 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]


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