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Lightningblade


Author: Uthmaan
ASL Info:    11/M/Texas
Elite Ratio:    1.83 - 44 /33 /7
Words: 20
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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I wrote this poem for darkrose16.


Lightningblade



Lightningblade, O Lightningblade
How sweet it sounds
How bad it pains

Lightningblade, O Lightningblade
How I envy your pain.




Submitted on 2007-01-17 19:44:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Dude! Man . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . you just keep gettin better and better. I can't believe you actually wrote this. It is truly amazing. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . You better right some more stuff little man. It's what you're good at. Keep 'em comin. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Keep 'em comin. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .


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| Posted on 2007-04-12 00:00:00 | by SilentDreams42 | [ Reply to This ]
  Hey good stuff lil bro. u should do a poem for each attack. that would be tight.
| Posted on 2007-01-17 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]


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