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    dots Submission Name: It's unknown to youdots
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    Author: loveofpoetry
    ASL Info:    20/female/New York
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 21/40/70
    Words: 234
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 608
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1437



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    dotsIt's unknown to youdots
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    I now believe that I have sinned
    I fell in love with you
    When you didn't love me back
    I feel so ashamed to know
    I'll never stop loving you
    I scream everyday in my head
    All because you broke my heart
    I want you back so bad
    I could only wish my pain would leave
    I may want you back
    But I want you to stop hurting me
    I may not be perfect
    But at least I loved you
    I loved you like no other would
    You will always be my true love
    No matter who I marry
    No matter who I love
    You will always be
    My one true love
    I don't understand why
    Why it's unknown to you
    That I love you
    I always thought you were my man
    But now I realize
    You were only using me
    To turn your pain
    Into my tears
    I never hurt you
    So I guess you needed to
    Get to me before I could
    My plans were crystal clear
    All I wanted from you
    Was a heart full of love
    My family hates you
    But yet I still love you
    Why can't you see
    Exactly how bad your hurting me
    Everytime I see you
    Or think of you
    My heart breaks more
    One day you'll break it so much
    That I'll die
    Can't you see I'm dying
    Because without your love
    I'm already dead!




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