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    dots Submission Name: A Brotherhood of Knightsdots
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    Author: nomad knight
    Elite Ratio:    6.66 - 110/75/41
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       This poem has a lot of Power metal influence. Power metal is a type of music generally much more popular in Europe than it is in the U.S. It's themes are more medieval, fantasy and mythology baised. All the lines here are my own. I relate to this kind of stuff a good deal and thought i'd put a poem up from this, prehaps quirky, aspect of myself. Tell me what you think of it.


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    dots A Brotherhood of Knightsdots
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    We are bound together by the things we believe
    United in our quest for what is just and right
    We are vigilant and wary, on the qui vive
    Quick to rise to the challenge and fight
    Our numbers maybe smaller than our foes
    But we will be brave, defiant and strong
    Continuing to rise from the raining blows
    Mounted and ready to charge into the throng
    Gathering momentum, the roar of the hooves pounding
    In the wind of speed, our banners proudly flying
    The lingering notes of our horns sounding
    The tips of our lances and blades of our swords shining
    The steel of our armor glittering in the sun
    A sight like that found in a bardís sung story
    For like heroes of old we move swift as one
    In chivalrous pursuit of illustrious glory




    Submitted on 2007-01-17 23:54:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      can you tell me where i can find some of this "power metal" because in australia we are really ony getting USA rubbish at the moment. i would like to say we are multi cultural, and in some ways we are, but when it comes to any form of media, we just lick up american crap. people like me who want something different would struggle if it werent for the internet.

    now about the piece:

    i like it. the theme itself is almost calming to me. i get the impression of relaxing after a battle hard won.


    i dont get braveheart, i somehow more get gothic warriors but then again thats just my heritage.
    | Posted on 2007-01-18 00:00:00 | by eowyn | [ Reply to This ]
      I can see how this could power metal influenced.
    it's written very well and i can picture braveheart in my head (don't know if thats what you were going for at all it just kinda happened) lol

    In chivalrous pursuit of illustrious glory

    this here just makes the whole for me
    bravo
    | Posted on 2007-01-18 00:00:00 | by digitalflower | [ Reply to This ]
      It flows really well. I also really like the way medieval society is compared to modern society. The idea of few against many isn't new, but I do like the way it's presented here.
    | Posted on 2007-01-18 00:00:00 | by HaldirLives | [ Reply to This ]


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