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    dots Submission Name: struggle ?dots
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    Author: spartan089
    ASL Info:    17/male/WA
    Elite Ratio:    4.09 - 12/9/10
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Misc/Passion
    Total Views: 134
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 609



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       it flows baby, it flows.


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    dotsstruggle ?dots
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    a sight
    a seer
    A different day appeared.

    Dawn to Dusk
    A little fear with musk

    A Bank
    A crank
    A wring of finks appear

    to leer
    and jeer

    BEWARE
    BEWARE

    the fruits have been taken.
    the colors have been washed.
    the sound has been drowned.


    AWAY
    AWAY!

    the creatures of dark.
    the evils of light.
    An angel of deceit.

    to ryme!
    to loo!
    to free!
    to glue!


    Rejoice.




    Submitted on 2007-01-17 23:56:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Very good poem Nathan!

    Congratulations

    Zakaria
    | Posted on 2007-01-20 00:00:00 | by Zakaria Glenza | [ Reply to This ]



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