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    dots Submission Name: Give Your Heart to Others dots
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    Author: Mykquillion
    ASL Info:    20/M/NEB
    Elite Ratio:    4.25 - 109/124/41
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Poetry/Society
    Total Views: 963
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 417



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    Bruxer: Someone who grinds his/her teeth.


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    dotsGive Your Heart to Others dots
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    All the same is not the way.
    Boredom bound.
    Just mix it up,
    And happiness ensues.

    The taste is better,
    With many different skittles.

    Making acceptance
    The exception,
    To your kindness,
    Makes you not kind at all.

    Donít stress yourself, Bruxer.

    Just,

    Love each and every everything.




    Submitted on 2007-01-18 14:14:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Without acceptance, this world would be full of hatred. Take a moment to think where we would be if those who are always humble turned into egocentric fools...
    | Posted on 2007-01-25 00:00:00 | by orange | [ Reply to This ]
      Thatís Kind of close to me it touched me hehehe nicely, this is a most wonderful piece of art. Its not poetry, its art. Ah to achieve it, is art science faith resilience acceptance and forgiveness etc.
    Love Di
    | Posted on 2007-01-19 00:00:00 | by Andz | [ Reply to This ]
      This lifts me up. definetly original, i like what you did with the ring up at the top. Its definetly some good advice, green skittles are good, but i dont know what i would do without the rest
    | Posted on 2007-01-18 00:00:00 | by tennisfuzz | [ Reply to This ]


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