I miss you,
though ive never,
and i feel,
I love you,
of your being,
we could be,
that i could be
by your side.
| hey there, pretty li'l miss,|
ooh, this is good...real good.
why do we always want what we can't have? i guess it's just the way it is....such a shame lol
as has already been said, it is something we can all relate to, very clever.
top marks from me too!
|| Posted on 2007-02-05 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ] || it's all what makes your heart beat. love for the sake of love....(no naughty running off with on-line lovers)||| Posted on 2007-01-20 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ] || Longing for something that is not there...|
I believe that is something that everyone can relate to, which makes this a very flexible, as well as interesting piece.
I look forward to the final draft.
|| Posted on 2007-01-19 00:00:00 | by Argola | [ Reply to This ] || Wow, Lou! This has a dynamite title that a reader can't resist! Your words are enchanting, and this is going to make a real first prize poem! I love the thought and the theme of the poem. Unrequited love has a poetic appeal that is second to none. Nice work Love!||| Posted on 2007-01-19 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ] || What lovely words you use here. I look forward to reading the final version.|
|| Posted on 2007-01-19 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ] |