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    dots Submission Name: Hateful Things I Diddots
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    Author: Poetic_tragedy6
    ASL Info:    25/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 114/155/74
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Poetry/Sorry
    Total Views: 614
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 613



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       A poem to my friend...


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    dotsHateful Things I Diddots
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    push you away
    I never meant to
    Cause you so much pain
    You tried to care for me
    But I was blinded by rage
    And I never could see
    You were there
    Through the times I cried
    I screamed at you for no reason
    You always tried
    To not get mad or yell back
    You were there
    When my red heart turned black
    Iím sorry
    For the things I said
    I never meant them
    All the tears you shed
    I really love you
    I just could never show it
    Can you forgive me
    For all those hateful things I did?




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      filling page after page with words you'll never read

    tell them how you feel

    keep writing

    hold on

    it's because we trust them we let down our guard and yell like there's no tomorrow
    | Posted on 2007-01-20 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]
      I know where you're coming from...I do this to my husband all the time... This one really hit home. Your words pretty much describe me, nicely put, direct.

    I don't know why, but we tend to hurt those we love the most.

    Take care of yourself,

    Sash1979
    | Posted on 2007-01-19 00:00:00 | by Sash1979 | [ Reply to This ]
      this is a write of a not just from the heart, but from a heart able to hear your spirit, i hope you can bring peace
    in yr family and i really mean that,
    and just maybe sweetie yr bubba is a god send for you.
    | Posted on 2007-01-18 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]


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