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    dots Submission Name: For Eddiedots
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    Author: silly monkey
    ASL Info:    17/ female/ somewhere
    Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 83/103/32
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsFor Eddiedots
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    Senseless synonyms and metaphors
    Twirl for the appropriate approach
    However, the cliché ness is what we gain
    But my love for you grows deeper
    Then an ancient root of a willow
    And it will always burn longer
    Than the warmth of the earth’s core
    It will for all time remain there
    After every constellation falls
    It has allow time to grove us together
    Allowing Love to exist
    Exist in a world so beautifully broken
    And us recalling its rarity
    Although, it has given me hope and rebirth
    Love has given me you,
    It has shown me someone rare in life
    Discovering only beautiful meanings
    And finding a person who defines life’s treasures.




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