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    dots Submission Name: Autumndots
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    Author: blue_pixie_dust
    ASL Info:    16 female
    Elite Ratio:    2.52 - 42/36/22
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
    Total Views: 141
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    Description:
       I just wrote this...pretty much on the spot one day while I was writing a post on something. So..here you go.


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    dotsAutumndots
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    Autumn;

    The leaves change from a dark green, to a Bright yellow, orange, red, or brown.

    The warm summer mornings melt away into a Cool, briske, fall morning.

    The days grow colder, and the smell grows Pleasanter.

    That wonderful, cold smell that reminds me of Apple pie and Thanksgiving.

    Autumn;

    God's beautiful painting to mankind. Complete with a scratch and sniff.





    Submitted on 2007-01-18 20:41:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      A very charming and cosy description.........
    ............................. Just like autumn......................I love that season too................
    Wonderful expression here............this was nice and short and sweet too.............

    Good effort : )
    | Posted on 2007-07-08 00:00:00 | by mdsouza | [ Reply to This ]
      this was really peaceful...i'm really touched by your work...it's like feeling a cool breeze...nice write..i love the ending..
    jen...don't change a thing
    | Posted on 2007-01-18 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]



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