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    dots Submission Name: Letting Godots
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    Author: jaycee
    ASL Info:    38/F/ Texas
    Elite Ratio:    4.85 - 2410/1167/153
    Words: 418
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsLetting Godots
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    I got your present--
    you know
    the one you sent via your sister
    through my sister-in-law.
    I was shocked; suprised;
    disbelieving even, and the tiniest bit sad.

    Merry Christmas!
    Too many years too late.
    Like a fruitcake passed
    from person to person,
    until even the love
    poured into the making is
    undetectable.
    I wish mine was......
    love undetectable that is
    Like yours always was

    Sometimes the white elephant is just what we need.
    Yours was.
    Like an expensive body wash
    rinsing away years of tension and grime from my soul--
    leaving a fresh outlook;
    a renewed spirit;
    a lavender induced peace
    Lingering
    as I pulled the plug
    on all the unfinished business.

    Thank you for the gift
    even if you weren't thinking of me.
    You closed the final chapter;
    Wrapped up the loose ends;
    Answered all the questions.

    You are at last happy

    and I,
    I can let go.

    .ea




    Submitted on 2007-01-19 01:04:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i am so pleased that i found this gem. i am sure it must be fate, because it is just the most perfect piece of hand crafted exorcism that i have found. and, because it is written down in your matter of fact style, the words somehow have a much greater effect than those found within the pages of those rather cloying self- help books about chicken soup and the like.

    this business of 'letting go' is the most peculiar experience, ever for me.... and it is hard to put your finger on it, even when all common sense tells you that it is the wisest course of action.

    i did a double take when i read the first sixteen lines of this. i thought, 'good grief, has she been reading my diary or something?'

    so,
    totally intrigued, i read on .......

    and your words were so brilliantly
    orchestrated that i cheered when
    you 'pulled the plug' !

    so,

    i feel that i have been inspired
    to go and find myself some of that
    lavender induced peace,
    because i am getting very tired of being manipulated.

    thank you.

    jacqueline
    | Posted on 2009-02-17 00:00:00 | by Alter idem | [ Reply to This ]
      This is interesting and retrospective, and reads like a personal and private chat. Letting go is always better than "being had"! Nice write, Jaycee!
    | Posted on 2008-03-06 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      This is magnificent...I hope that I am someday in a place where I can write this very thing.

    "until even the love
    poured into the making is
    undetectable.
    I wish mine was......
    love undetectable that is
    Like yours always was"

    I like this part a lot...and I can seriously relate...

    "Like an expensive body wash
    rinsing away years of tension and grime from my soul--
    leaving a fresh outlook;
    a renewed spirit;
    a lavender induced peace"

    I need some of that...lol.

    This is just beautiful...I love it!

    | Posted on 2007-01-20 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]



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