Last Chance to Dance by Mykquillion

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Submission Name: Last Chance to Dance dots

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Author:	Mykquillion
ASL Info:	20/M/NEB
Elite Ratio:	4.25 - 109/124/41
Words:	17

Class/Type:	Haiku/
Total Views:	968
Average Vote:	4.0000
Bytes:	92

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Last Chance to Dance dots

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Why won’t you love me?
Just, for a little while,
I will be dead soon.

Submitted on 2007-01-19 01:17:31 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  For a haiku it really reaches out and grabs out the heart of the reader. Such a painful feeling to have to beg for love at the eve of death; that shouldn't be an option for a kind soul. Sounds like the person whose love he/she is seeking has a hard time with even glancing at that person.

-angel-
| Posted on 2007-01-23 00:00:00 | by just an angel | [ Reply to This ]
  This is very short and yet so tragic. I don't know what to say about this except for the fact that gave strong feelings of longing mixed with despair.
| Posted on 2007-01-23 00:00:00 | by JAcksonJr | [ Reply to This ]
  Love Di....
Hope you catch them.
Do you need cupid to carry Diamond tipped titanium arrows?
No I know thats not funny at all, it was not supposed to be, it was an honest question.

Hugs
| Posted on 2007-01-19 00:00:00 | by Andz | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.