For a haiku it really reaches out and grabs out the heart of the reader. Such a painful feeling to have to beg for love at the eve of death; that shouldn't be an option for a kind soul. Sounds like the person whose love he/she is seeking has a hard time with even glancing at that person.
Love Di....
Hope you catch them.
Do you need cupid to carry Diamond tipped titanium arrows?
No I know thats not funny at all, it was not supposed to be, it was an honest question.