If I had read this as the first one of your poems, I'd say this has a distinctly emo feel to it.
Why? Well, that's a little obvious. There's not any direct mention of knives, but there are other things that are generally associated with (or at least I associate them anyway) emotional hardcores.
For example, voices in the head. Schizophrenia I say.
Well, thou didst not speak to me with this piece, but I'll still say thanks for sharing.
Rest in pieces.