All That I've Got

Author: poetic_tragedy ASL Info:    16/f/USA Elite Ratio:    2.89 - 39 /55 /30 Words: 115

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All That I've Got

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Take my hand Lead me through the darkness of unknown thoughts Guide me with the light in your eyes Because that light is all I've got. Hold me in your arms Tell me everything will be okay Reassure me now Because I'm not sure if I'll live another day With your arms around me I can do anything You're the spark that lights the fire deep inside my heart The breath that keeps me living I hope I can thank you one day But I doubt your deeds can be repaid The things you've done for me, the sacrifices you've made Have saved my life in more than one way.

Submitted on 2007-01-20 10:29:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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I love this ... If this is about how you feel toward someone then I can definately relate to it ... I have someone I feel this way for except its more complicated than that. I really like it keep it up n I'd love to see more of your writings :)

| Posted on 2007-01-22 00:00:00 | by black- tears | [ Reply to This ]

I like it... something about it makes it sweet but very simple.

| Posted on 2007-01-20 00:00:00 | by Gothic Misery | [ Reply to This ]

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