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All That I've Got

Author: poetic_tragedy
ASL Info:    16/f/USA
Elite Ratio:    2.89 - 39 /55 /30
Words: 115
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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I wrote this about my boyfriend, my one true love.

All That I've Got

Take my hand
Lead me through the darkness of unknown thoughts
Guide me with the light in your eyes
Because that light is all I've got.

Hold me in your arms
Tell me everything will be okay
Reassure me now
Because I'm not sure if I'll live another day

With your arms around me
I can do anything
You're the spark that lights the fire deep inside my heart
The breath that keeps me living

I hope I can thank you one day
But I doubt your deeds can be repaid
The things you've done for me, the sacrifices you've made
Have saved my life in more than one way.

Submitted on 2007-01-20 10:29:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I love this ... If this is about how you feel toward someone then I can definately relate to it ... I have someone I feel this way for except its more complicated than that. I really like it keep it up n I'd love to see more of your writings :)
| Posted on 2007-01-22 00:00:00 | by black- tears | [ Reply to This ]
  I like it... something about it makes it sweet but very simple.
| Posted on 2007-01-20 00:00:00 | by Gothic Misery | [ Reply to This ]

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