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    dots Submission Name: All That I've Gotdots
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    Author: poetic_tragedy
    ASL Info:    16/f/USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.89 - 39/55/30
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 1119
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    Bytes: 711



    Description:
       I wrote this about my boyfriend, my one true love.


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    dotsAll That I've Gotdots
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    Take my hand
    Lead me through the darkness of unknown thoughts
    Guide me with the light in your eyes
    Because that light is all I've got.

    Hold me in your arms
    Tell me everything will be okay
    Reassure me now
    Because I'm not sure if I'll live another day

    With your arms around me
    I can do anything
    You're the spark that lights the fire deep inside my heart
    The breath that keeps me living

    I hope I can thank you one day
    But I doubt your deeds can be repaid
    The things you've done for me, the sacrifices you've made
    Have saved my life in more than one way.




    Submitted on 2007-01-20 10:29:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I love this ... If this is about how you feel toward someone then I can definately relate to it ... I have someone I feel this way for except its more complicated than that. I really like it keep it up n I'd love to see more of your writings :)
    | Posted on 2007-01-22 00:00:00 | by black- tears | [ Reply to This ]
      I like it... something about it makes it sweet but very simple.
    | Posted on 2007-01-20 00:00:00 | by Gothic Misery | [ Reply to This ]


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