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Water Casket

Author: caballero7137
ASL Info:    22/m/victoriaville
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Words: 71
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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Houdini's Chinese'S Water Torture Chamber Trick was the inspiration

Water Casket

I paint a face of white
on me facial canvas
and dress it
with fears
and smudged tears,
an ill acidic blue,
along the corners
of the wrinkle eyes
of mine.
Simply watching it pour
like trickles of rain
drowning drenchingly
bit by bit
my lips ,chin and
while clamping the heart
to a full arrest
with no breath
even in my soul.
I’ve become
A hallow.

Submitted on 2007-01-20 15:30:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Mmm hate that idea, of drowning infront of millions. Imagine the horror in your eyes if it actually happened. I know I'm supposed to be critiqueing but I really don't know what to say. It sounds like someone who's doing the trick but it's rather inconclusive... o.o unless I don't know what I'm talking about. At all.
| Posted on 2007-01-20 00:00:00 | by Mieko | [ Reply to This ]

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