Description: I kind of wrote this on the spot as well. I like it though. It's short, yes. Maybe I will add more on it soon, but I wanted to put something in.
A silhouette of green
Lays across the forest floor
As I climb the trees
Of once forgotten doors
To my past and of my future
Where my children will also play
Where their imaginations grow for sure
And they will never be forgotten
i think it might be a mistake to add more to it, its short and sweet, gives you a glimpse of something wonderful and i think thats what made me like it so much.
it,s a short poem but it is done simply, and says what it has to say, some poems carry on and on, getting nowhere sometimes a poem should be short and sweet like this one. i liked it
gerry
It's very sweet short. I don't think you should add to it anymore, but I did notice that 'there' should be 'their' since the imaginations belong to them. But, grammar doesn't matter to me much. I really enjoyed this. <3
Submission Name: Forest floor
