Hmm.. i really like this piece, it makes you think. I like the point of veiw taken on this, like you're a friend and you know what she is doing to herself and what its doing to those around her, and that one day people are going to stop trying to be with her b/c they know she will just push them away. I especially like these lines:
Better to stay the nights alone
And wish for a prince to show
Then to take effort to make it work
It shows that she has more or less become hopeless to finding someone she will love, but it says it in a way that, i dunno, works....I just like how it is phrased. Here's to a job well done.
Keep It Up.
Wow thats pretty good. Its true and right about now I know exactly what you mean. only in this case it was me who screwed it up and not her. And I'm worried if I feel the same way she does, wondering if its just the lonliness I feel inside making me miss her. because I know I loved her but, maybe not enough. I'm sure a few people can relate to this but how you said it, was very straight forward and I guess that theres no other way of saying it. thank you, this really is a work of art. although if you read the first line of the second stanza you mis wrote she's....or atleast thats what I think you meant. keep it up.