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    dots Submission Name: Deadly Passiondots
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    Author: TwistedMinded
    ASL Info:    23/m/San Diego
    Elite Ratio:    1.74 - 82/109/32
    Words: 310
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
    Total Views: 1076
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1719



    Description:
       Ladies please dont take this personal
    or up the ass


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    dotsDeadly Passiondots
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    What the fuck happen
    She took me for a ride you can’t imagine
    I didn’t want to kill her
    But it was crazy deadly passion

    She was sucking my dick
    I grab a stick
    I was tired of this chick
    I grab her by the hair
    I made her say a prayer
    She said “come on baby, I don’t even care”
    Brains splashing all over the wall
    I cut her tongue and made her clean my wall

    I met this bitch in the hood getting blown
    We boned all night long
    Until the night was gone
    It was deadly passionate sex
    Then she started biting my dick
    I was crack out and that’s when I grab the stick

    She had no reason to get mad at my other chick
    She was yapping her mouth
    I was trying to get high
    Bitch was loud
    That’s why I got tired of this bitch

    So I grab her by her hair
    “Slut shut the fuck up or ill kill you”
    She didn’t believe me
    She wanted to make me feel better
    So she started sucking my dick
    And that’s when she bit my dick
    And I grab a stick
    I still had her by the hair
    Then I made her say a prayer

    “Come on baby, I don’t even care”
    I was crack out I didn’t want to do it
    BANG BANG
    “Fuck you bitch, Die bitch, die’
    But she wouldn’t
    So I keep on going
    Brain splashing all over my wall
    “Fuck”
    I had just painted that wall
    So I cut her tongue and made her lick my wall

    “What the fuck happen, she took me for a ride you can’t imagine, I didn’t want to kill her but it was deadly fuckin passion”




    Submitted on 2007-01-20 23:53:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow...That was interesting.. a little scary..But I really liked how you repeated the 1st line. lol, you shouldnt kill people. It's not nice ; )

    Muy Bien

    _randa_
    | Posted on 2007-06-21 00:00:00 | by Randa04 | [ Reply to This ]
      
    hahaha...rheeelllyyy

    mmmm

    drop dead from givin head fred...

    takes on a whole new meaning




    | Posted on 2007-03-03 00:00:00 | by clay | [ Reply to This ]
      erm.....nevamind...


    lol are you trying to freak us out deliberatlely??
    ive read a few now, and i dont think you'll get head or have sex ever again....lmao
    michelle
    | Posted on 2007-03-03 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]
      i just posted that so the whole world could see it.......
    [censored].
    [censored].
    damnit.
    thats just [censored] wrong.
    | Posted on 2007-02-13 00:00:00 | by XmaryjaneX | [ Reply to This ]
      LMFAO
    WTF...
    hahahahahaa
    ^ _^
    teehehe
    ooohh wow.
    emph.
    k im good.
    this is kinda scary though, remind me never to give head again!
    | Posted on 2007-02-13 00:00:00 | by XmaryjaneX | [ Reply to This ]
      OKay this piece is full of a druggy rage that I don't understand. You need to lay off the [censored].



    Sage
    | Posted on 2007-01-25 00:00:00 | by sageeriol | [ Reply to This ]
      I love it ... I think it's genius :) ...
    | Posted on 2007-01-22 00:00:00 | by black- tears | [ Reply to This ]
      wtf, dude?
    | Posted on 2007-01-21 00:00:00 | by BleedingTears | [ Reply to This ]
      ...whoa...:|
    | Posted on 2007-01-21 00:00:00 | by Keller | [ Reply to This ]


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