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    dots Submission Name: Crowsdots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 31
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       This was inspired by a poem by Ted Hughes.


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    With a mad man's laugh,
    they walk on borrowed legs,
    clumsily dance a reel in the sunlight,
    and glide away to dance again.




    Submitted on 2004-01-31 00:04:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      you really got a great way of painting not only a picture but a beautiful picture one in my mind when i read your poems
    | Posted on 2013-08-01 00:00:00 | by Rhaine | [ Reply to This ]
      lol, like blackbirds upon a telephone wire? that's awesome you have to examine it to understand it that's alot of depth. and i love the writing style i'm glad you stick to one thing and i'm also glad you sort of told me off so i could research this kind of poetry and learn to love it which i am lol
    | Posted on 2004-02-01 00:00:00 | by Soulraven | [ Reply to This ]
      You do a great job of evoking an image with words; and, while I disagree about your stuff reading like Dickinson, I'd take that as a great compliment. After all, she's one of a pretty elite handfull of American poets who changed the literary world.
    | Posted on 2004-02-01 00:00:00 | by DevilDinosaur | [ Reply to This ]
      I really don't think that I'm copping Dickinson in any way. I write short poems which is about where the similarities end. If I were copping her, I'd use a lot more dashes and capitalize words a lot more.
    | Posted on 2004-01-31 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]


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