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    dots Submission Name: Testosterone vs Estrogendots
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    Author: Twice
    Elite Ratio:    4 - 71/82/52
    Words: 462
    Class/Type: Misc/Passion
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    Description:
       I was watching a show where a lesbian was in the process of recieving a sex change. Well long story short she was discribing the differences that she felt when she started taking testoserone, It was funny that a devout feminest was now thinking of women as objects of lust.


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    dotsTestosterone vs Estrogendots
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    A man and a women are sitting across from each other in the subway:

    The women thinks-

    "Wow, he's cute,
    I wonder what book he's reading?,
    (The Catcher in the Rye) huh,
    I wonder if there is a reason he's reading that book, maybe a little crazy.
    Ohh, nice shoes, maybe Prada.
    I bet you that he has money.
    I wonder if he thinks I'm cute?,
    I should have spent longer on my hair this morning it's a shambles."

    The man thinks-

    "Yo, check her out,
    Too bad she's sitting down, I can't see if she has a nice ass,
    Man, her perfume is driving me crazy,
    I wonder if she puts it on her belly button?,
    How nice would it be to lick that belly button
    I bet her sweat taste of fine wine and jelly beans. I wonder what position she likes, it does'nt matter to me, I like them all."


    A man and a women pass each other on the street:

    The women thinks-

    "Don't look, don't look
    I kind of like his style, although he walks a little funny,
    Oh is he smoking, kind of a turn off.
    I wonder if he's funny?, he looks like he might be funny.
    Nice leather jacket, maybe he's in a band, thats kinda hot.
    Something about a man who can play an instrument that drives me crazy,
    OK he's past me, I wonder if he's thinking of turning around to talk to me?"

    The man thinks-

    "Look at me, Look at me,
    Man, did she paint that outfit on this morning,
    I would say those are about a "C" cup,
    [picture in his head on the girl naked on top with the beautiful breast bouncing about]
    I wounder what she sounds like when she moans? Is she a screamer or does she just lie there?
    Come on look at me!!!!
    Damn it, she did'nt look at me, let me check out this ass real quick [He spins his head around real fast to check out the backend of the girl as she walks away], ohh it's nice, maybe I'll run into her in a bar one night after she's had a couple of drinks."

    A man and a women just finished having sex for the first time:

    The women thinks-

    "That was so beautiful,
    I wonder if he felt the same thing that I did?
    I wonder what his family is like?, I hope that they like me.
    It was kinda wierd when he started to spank me but oh well whatever floats his boat.
    I can't wait to snuggle all night long, this is my favorate part."

    The man thinks-

    "What now"






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      Harharhar ...dude, you nailed this perfectly... not saying I think these things, but hey, ok, I do sometimes.

    Thanks for the laughs,

    Jase
    | Posted on 2007-02-01 00:00:00 | by alteredlife | [ Reply to This ]
      truthfull enough! Men and women are always at odds...unless its like that movie "what women want" scary concepts.

    I would have liked a Little more of a play on words, But then again I really like the fact that there is no perfectly maching words.

    Being the fact that this was written by a man, actually says volumes on the male mind, and there relative thought on women and the mental ans emotional states.

    This poem actually promptes me to believe that men aren't clueless... at least not all men. ( Completely lacking boyfriend excluded from theory)

    The poem playes duels on the mental status at any given point in a courtship. From the chance meeting in a subway to the post sexual encounter.
    Simply put: Men and women have similar views on life and situations, however they walk away with totally different descriptions and feelings.
    These feeling are the bases of opinions and fights.

    This was way to long. im sorry if its pointless.
    J

    P.s.
    I did enjoy this.
    | Posted on 2007-01-22 00:00:00 | by butterfly wings | [ Reply to This ]
      lol dude, i think you should stick with what a man is thinking and leave out the woman's thoughts...personally, if this were me, i would be thinking more along the lines of the guy..Look at me Look at me, yeah I know you want me...and the whole cuddle thing, C'mon...i just had ya all over me, the last thing i want is to be attached all night long.

    and just a little secret us chicks have...we check out guys asses too...
    | Posted on 2007-01-21 00:00:00 | by MmR | [ Reply to This ]
      What the hell?
    | Posted on 2007-01-21 00:00:00 | by tOXIC_wAST3 | [ Reply to This ]


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