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    dots Submission Name: I want to die in peacedots
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    Author: kellz
    ASL Info:    25/F/England
    Elite Ratio:    2.97 - 122/148/49
    Words: 143
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 381
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       im just so depressed being alone on a friday night babysitting a 12 year old is no fun?


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    dotsI want to die in peacedots
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    Oh how much more of this can i take
    my life is shit im always board and the
    one person i know and like is not here
    but miles away.
    I'll rather just take a bath and die
    no one will notice just my mum
    i will slit my wrists and watch
    the crimson blood flow to the
    floor it will be much more easy
    than to stab or shoot myself
    also less messy for my mum
    so crule world good bye from me
    i just want to die in peace.
    How much will it hurt i don't like pain
    maybe the water will help sooth the wounds
    my blood it thin it everywhere oh mum
    im sorry i had to do it i'll watch you from
    heaven I really do love you.




    Submitted on 2004-06-04 17:42:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      all i can say is i agree with every one else good poem for venting but do not do it. life is to short as it is you dont need to make it any shorter. please dont do it. lili
    | Posted on 2004-06-04 00:00:00 | by lili | [ Reply to This ]
      not having a boyfriend is not so bad. hope you don't do it in reality. that's not worth it. I like your poem cause I can understand the thoughts behind it. but you should watch your spelling (bored, cruel, etc...). such a piece is good for venting but don't make it true.
    | Posted on 2004-06-04 00:00:00 | by eve1684 | [ Reply to This ]



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