alright. i loved when people tackle issues that no one ever wants to talk about. this hits pretty hard and is very vivid in your feelings. great word choices and the last line wraps it all up very nicely. keep it up. only minor spell errors.
Very good on a touchy topic. I believe its a woman's choice but it must have been extremely hard to do and i can't relate so i am not gonna say that i can. Us girls go through a lot and what you have written very touching: I like that last line: "You can't say goodbye If you never got to say hello" hope to read more from you.
This very deep on very touchy topic. I can kinda realte with my ex-girl being pregant going though all the name calling all the choices to make. Honetsly i think girls/woman are mentally stronger than a male with all the [censored] they have to go though.
I loved the ending very powerfull, ends the piece like i want more.
My fave lines where
"Sleep if off, take these pills
Your child sleeps forever in a trash can
Don' worry, your life goes on
But so does this memory....
Yet they never tell you that"
"You can't say goodbye
If you never got to say Hello"
Words of discouragement
Words of pain
These people won't relent
Their goal is plain and clear
A child must die before they are pleased"