Description: Past love, current love, blahblahblah. I think it turned out alright, what do you think?
The Mask -------------------------------------------
Whisper in the darkness
The things you want from me
Live in happiness if only for a moment
I'll be waiting here forever
If thats what it takes
Long lost memories whipser slowly
to me
Make a wish in today
To go back to those days...
Believing you were happy
Deceived that you were loved
All the while...
Begging for the truth to come
To you
I've been hiding behind her for so long
She has become what i am
My mask is now morphing into my soul
I try to come to the surface to touch your face
Yet i can't find the light....
i agree with jessy, you are gifted in many ways, and the one apparent here is your ability to recognize the 'mask' forcibly worn by us all. search and never settle for something/someone doesn’t have what you need, love, attention that sort of thing. keep it up !
The poem finds me in a interesting point, I am in love is [censored] and romantance is a fable stage in life. So I guess It makes me think that we spend so much energy trying to make things be something. one day this will all change I guess. But keep fighting or find something new. Do something to find yourself. Keep writing it down
Submission Name: The Mask
