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    dots Submission Name: Roomate Confessionaldots
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    Author: Artist4rent
    ASL Info:    20-F-KÝbenhavn
    Elite Ratio:    2.91 - 37/32/31
    Words: 122
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
    Total Views: 761
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 753



    Description:
       I been living with someone for the last 2 years. Were not the best of friends. We are opposite. She is a senistive, some what broken person. I am strong willed, and quite content. We have tried to do this living thing for so long. and it hasn't been horrible but its finnally over and its not ending well... This is a bit dramatic from the situation. But its the extreme feelings of all lot of contain emotions. So yes.


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    dotsRoomate Confessionaldots
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    Silence can kill
    So can looking the other away
    Maybe its just the pride in the way
    Its a never ending cycle
    I am me, A piece a plastic
    You are you, A piece of cloth

    You cry a river
    I sit in silence
    Pain brings you company
    and leave only shadows for me

    maybe I am too strong
    and you are just weak
    roommates or just common existence
    Its the same story with new twist

    I haven't changed
    and I doubt you aswell
    lets not pretend to be happy
    If all their is pain inside.

    I am a heartless bitch
    All I see is pathelic
    No more apolgeizes this time
    You are leaving to save my mind




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