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    dots Submission Name: Solving For The Unknowndots

    Author: lynn7
    ASL Info:    43/ St. Augustine, FL
    Elite Ratio:    3.38 - 419/288/103
    Words: 149
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsSolving For The Unknowndots

    The source of the unknown
    is beyond what my mind allows
    for only through the heart
    can it be reached
    tucked deep within its center
    lies a hidden door to be entered
    a mystical place
    for only few have found
    even fewer...have entered
    this is where you will find
    the true essence Christ
    the transformations of oneís heart
    into the Heart of God
    by entering, all will be erased
    from the heartís past memory
    to bring forth divine love
    in the purest form
    from that moment on
    the heart will only know
    itís one true love
    however, rare this gift may be
    it is not given to the recipient
    for themself or just for the sake of love
    it is a gift given to the world
    by Christ himself
    for all to witness
    the nature and love of God

    Submitted on 2007-01-21 19:37:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Lynn, what lovely words these are from you. I really did enjoy reading this.

    Excellent stuff from you.

    PS thanks for your thoughts on 'To Win Your Love'.

    | Posted on 2007-01-22 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]

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