i can totally relate to this... a heartbreaking riddle, indeed...
i like how you wrote "this is right" and you put it on the right side... it helpswith the immense imagery of this piece...
"blah"
how simply put... that's how i felt lately...
the only part of this write that i dont get is... "Foo" did someone break your heart... and you're calling them a fool? they made you feel "blah"... which causes you to think that maybe this is the ".end"? well you know what jimmy? this isnt the end... you'll bounce back... in fact.. this was written months ago... you're probably already doing better...
overall a good write... i would have been confused if i hadnt noticed this was in the riddle class
i definitely see improvement and potential in your work ;)
Submission Name: Formatting Test 2
