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    dots Submission Name: Formatting Test 2dots
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    Author: Webmaster
    ASL Info:    21
    Elite Ratio:    7.95 - 507/166/43
    Words: 14
    Class/Type: Riddle/Love
    Total Views: 1479
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 161



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    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsFormatting Test 2dots
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    This is a formatting test "Quotes are stupid"-Foobar
          Foo This is right1 Blah .end




    Submitted on 2007-01-21 21:13:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      test
    | Posted on 2011-07-30 00:00:00 | by Webmaster | [ Reply to This ]
      asdfasdf""'''11
    | Posted on 2011-07-10 00:00:00 | by Webmaster | [ Reply to This ]
      Poignant and contrapuntal.
    | Posted on 2008-09-25 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]
      Ahaha! FUBAR!!


    So true...

    So.

    True.

    Aren't we all at some point?


    +Moz+
    | Posted on 2008-03-18 00:00:00 | by GoKart Mozart | [ Reply to This ]
      i can totally relate to this... a heartbreaking riddle, indeed...

    i like how you wrote "this is right" and you put it on the right side... it helpswith the immense imagery of this piece...

    "blah"

    how simply put... that's how i felt lately...

    the only part of this write that i dont get is... "Foo" did someone break your heart... and you're calling them a fool? they made you feel "blah"... which causes you to think that maybe this is the ".end"? well you know what jimmy? this isnt the end... you'll bounce back... in fact.. this was written months ago... you're probably already doing better...

    overall a good write... i would have been confused if i hadnt noticed this was in the riddle class

    i definitely see improvement and potential in your work ;)
    | Posted on 2007-06-13 00:00:00 | by besodemuerte | [ Reply to This ]
      cool yoooo
    | Posted on 2007-02-11 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]


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