Just wanted to Know

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Just wanted to Know

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Is it safe to eat spinach again? because I've been Malnourished. Needing something leafy and green. I am what I am, but that's not all that I've been, and hopefully not all that i'll be but who will free me from this ... because lately all that i've consumed are woes (at the occasional pity party) and I've lacked the brute strenth to defeat my life's Blutoes and I long for a healthy diet of Olive Oil, but i've been feeling a little Wimpy as though my forearms aren't quite big enough and I can't get a grip.

Submitted on 2007-01-23 02:35:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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"I Yam what I yam!" I like interesting pieces inspired by something that usually isn't considered poetic. From Ergolgo's comment I sense there is a between-the-two-of-you joke but I enjoyed it anyhoo! Happy Day & Smiles to Share tif

| Posted on 2007-10-19 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]

That's all I can stands cause I can't stands no more! I caught your drift my man.

| Posted on 2007-04-15 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ]

This was really good, my only think about it from this ... felt like it was a bit out of place or forced, other than that great, I wasn't too sure on the popeye reference, although it was obviously my first impression, as perhaps I am a bit too young for him, although I did watch him growing up. Other than the one critique, good sincere heart felt piece.

| Posted on 2007-02-15 00:00:00 | by Ygi | [ Reply to This ]

This is really fantastic I have always had a fascination with the Popeye cartoons and you really put my whole obsession into perspective Again you did a brilliant job on this I am easily making this a favorite GREAT WORK!!! God Bless Ron Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think Thank You Ron

| Posted on 2007-01-23 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]

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