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    Author: babygirl09
    ASL Info:    21/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 69/63/49
    Words: 53
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       sorry so sloppy, doin this without a teacher seein so i can't read how i'm typin, i'm just typin holla at yall later
    lizzie


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    loving two guys is hard as hell
    one says whatever and the other says no
    always goin back and forth so damn aggervating
    dont' know what to do
    cause i've got two loves in my life
    and neither of them are giving me a direction
    so that i can decide




    Submitted on 2007-01-23 14:54:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      yea i dont know how old this is but you gonna have to pick or else your gonna lose both of them in the end
    | Posted on 2007-02-13 00:00:00 | by Dominic_poet | [ Reply to This ]
      listen to the one part of your essence that will know " your spirit" it does exist, it does know, it will help,
    im here if you want to know how?
    | Posted on 2007-01-25 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]
      this guy down here makes no fukkin sense

    i say fukkit
    dont trip and just pimpit

    your boy twistedminded
    | Posted on 2007-01-24 00:00:00 | by TwistedMinded | [ Reply to This ]
      I suggest that you leave the one who says that it is ok for you to do that... You see, he really doesn't give a damn about you, not for real. the guy that it does matter to, he may or may not be a jealous freak, but at least you matter to him somehow. so maybe you should choose. because you just might lose the one that matters if you make him make your decision for you.

    Derik
    | Posted on 2007-01-23 00:00:00 | by psyko | [ Reply to This ]


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