The Way I Do
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I wrote this poem for my brother awhile back hope you all like it!..I'll be submitting more when i have time
The Way I Do
To show my love for you Is a shame Loving you is like a game...get played along the way The sound of your voice makes my day But my longing to see you drives me insane What to do when you found your way To my brain Sit and cry at the sound of your name Better yet walk around with a bat in hand To show I'm mad...so watch your head Explain the unknown only to you I would do With you comes along my faith A friend that could never be replaced Dreams only you know All you have to do is look in my eyes Suprised to see loneliness deep inside What a shame I miss you everyday Pray you stay out of harms way But what are sisters for Other then to love you the way I do |
Submitted on 2007-01-23 15:09:13 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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I dig your poem, I like how you go back and forth between your emotions. So often when we write we focus on one specific feeling and endulge. I like the fact that you go above that and bring lots of different elements in. If you get a chance, check out some of my writings, take care, keep writing....| | Posted on 2007-01-23 00:00:00 | by StevenJay | [ Reply to This ] | this is really cute, and it's good that you have such a strong bond with your brother, not many siblings have that :-) | | Posted on 2007-01-23 00:00:00 | by Ygi | [ Reply to This ] | |
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