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Lies of Love

Author: _Phoenix
ASL Info:    18/F/FL
Elite Ratio:    4.56 - 46 /31 /21
Words: 88
Class/Type: Poetry /You left me
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written for another former boyfriend, thank God im rid of the bloody bastard.
- Phoenix

Lies of Love

I thought that you loved me
I thought that you cared
But in truth you never would have dared
To express your feelings
Hiding deep inside
For it was to me you lied.
Said you'd be there
Claimed that you would always care
What a load of bullshit that turned out to be
You lied to them and you lied to me
I thought you'd always be by my side
But then you lied
I thought you'd be there to wipe away my tears
But now they've dried.

Submitted on 2007-01-23 15:14:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I liked your poem, the only problem is your ryhme scheme. It is sort of hard to read along with. It is not traditional which I like, but it was a little choppy to read. Other then that however, good write. Take a peek at some of my stuff if you get a chance. Keep writing....
| Posted on 2007-01-23 00:00:00 | by StevenJay | [ Reply to This ]

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