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The Diver

Author: TeeTee
ASL Info:    15/f/georgia
Elite Ratio:    1.31 - 30 /32 /22
Words: 124
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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The Diver

The diver dived deep under the water
But he wasnt deep enough
So the ocean said to the diver
Go deeper
So the diver went deeper
He swam and he swam
The waves in the ocean became bigger and bigger
The ocean called out again
Go Deeper
The diver swam as hard as he could
Deeper called the ocean
The diver couldnt take it any more
He dived a little deeper
As the waves got bigger
The divers heart began to beat faster
He couldnt hold his breath any longer
Must go deeper,.....
The diver swam and he swam but,....
He Drowned in the ocean
9 months later
On the other side of the ocean
There layed a large pond

Submitted on 2007-01-23 15:38:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  this is a really great metephor, the whole poem i mean, for the struggles in life, but i dont get what the pond was. could you possibly shed some light on that? this is a really great write. i've read your stuff before and it's full of emotion that help you write better. write on

| Posted on 2007-01-23 00:00:00 | by rocker5871 | [ Reply to This ]

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