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The diver dived deep under the water But he wasnt deep enough So the ocean said to the diver Go deeper So the diver went deeper He swam and he swam The waves in the ocean became bigger and bigger The ocean called out again Go Deeper The diver swam as hard as he could Deeper called the ocean The diver couldnt take it any more He dived a little deeper As the waves got bigger The divers heart began to beat faster He couldnt hold his breath any longer Must go deeper,..... The diver swam and he swam but,.... He Drowned in the ocean 9 months later On the other side of the ocean There layed a large pond |
this is a really great metephor, the whole poem i mean, for the struggles in life, but i dont get what the pond was. could you possibly shed some light on that? this is a really great write. i've read your stuff before and it's full of emotion that help you write better. write on r5871 | Posted on 2007-01-23 00:00:00 | by rocker5871 | [ Reply to This ] | |