I love this poem. I could relate to this alot because my family moves alot. But yeah I have to agree with ron and dimension it had great rhyme, I liked the theme, and the flow was great. Mind giving me some feedback on my work?
I miss reading your stuff, but now that I have, I realized how much I've been missing! I like this piece alot, the flow, the rhyme, the theme. amazing, really. I loved the part about the talented fool. The entire thing actually, it's all written really well. kudos duffy.
This write is INCREDIBLE!!!
By far one of your best writes I have read
This flows beautifully and really takes on a life of its own with its own inground beat
This write really hit home for me as I just moved back to New Jersey to help my Mom
I am making this one a Favorite!!!
Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think