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    dots Submission Name: Patiencedots
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    Author: lynn7
    Elite Ratio:    3.2 - 297/212/58
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Misc/Venting
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    dotsPatiencedots
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    Patience
    Such a pretty word,
    however,
    what one has to endure
    to receive it
    is far from
    a picture of beauty


    It is all powerful
    all consuming
    a tsunami of the highest
    that forces forth what
    lies beneath the surface
    to cleanse and destroy
    coming forth with a fury
    but receding quite peacefully
    pushing forth it’s tide
    beyond what time has allowed
    until it has broken you down
    wave by wave
    minute by minute
    strained and tattered
    until all that is left
    is a shipwreck
    of good intentions




    Submitted on 2007-01-24 12:18:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hi, Lynn, a little ruff on emotions. poe
    | Posted on 2007-01-27 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      Patience is indeed a very precious virtue Lynn.

    Very well written as usual.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2007-01-24 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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