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    dots Submission Name: Double Standarddots
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    Author: AeThe Lost Poet
    ASL Info:    19/M/DE
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 147/184/122
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 459
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 508



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    dotsDouble Standarddots
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    You set the rules,
    You must follow the, too,
    Hypocrites are cruel,
    Yet I found one in you,
    Check the other side of the line,
    You might get scared,
    I’ve found my “fair”
    But to you I ask “where?”
    Where do you deal,
    Other than behind my back,
    And how should I feel,
    When righteousness you lack,
    What type of friend are you,
    This is standard deviation,
    You’re a Hypocrite,
    But enemy in abbreviation.




    Submitted on 2007-01-24 13:45:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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