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I'm tired

Author: Perpetualdreamz
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Words: 38
Class/Type: Rant /I am dead inside
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thnx to -nighttonight-

I'm tired

I'm tired of acting happy when I'm hurt
I'm tired of crying when there's no one around that cares
I'm tired of smiling when there's truly a frown
I'm tired of loving when you don't love me back

Submitted on 2007-01-24 14:57:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  so am I...Im that tired to, although sometimes Im tired of being overly sincere, Im tired of being afraid to act on impulse, to break out the cage or at least mold it to something I like.

nice bloggy feeling...nothing more sincere, open and good for being so
| Posted on 2007-01-24 00:00:00 | by jcpdandalice | [ Reply to This ]
  Short and sweet. Aren't we all tired of things like that ? It is normal for humans to feel that way, we all wish to be ourselves and be accepted for that. We all want to be loved, be and stay happy. Beautiful write, it shows how not only you feel, but how so many other people in the world do. If you can tame emotions like that, you can live life. We all get hurt, but we can't fake life. "Life is for living not regretting."

Short and sweet, to the point, and oh so true. Great job
| Posted on 2007-01-24 00:00:00 | by djtswing | [ Reply to This ]

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