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    dots Submission Name: As the rain roared outside…dots
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    Author: Autumnstorm
    ASL Info:    15/female/somewere else
    Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 0/1/1
    Words: 231
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 595
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    Description:
       this poem is about the salem witch trials. I tryed to show a perspective from the people watching and the people who are getting burned. it is in a different style that I unfortunatly can't remember at the moment. please enjoy!!!


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    dotsAs the rain roared outside…dots
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    As the rain roared outside…

    As the rain roared outside
    Forbidden to see the pain inside
    The crystal eyes looking far and wide
    Where is the promise of the ebbing tide?

    Forbidden to see the pain inside
    Failing to see the tears they cried
    Where is the promise of the ebbing tide?
    Shadows spreading far and wide

    Failing to see the tears they cried
    Pain and fear by the pale moon light
    Shadows spreading far and wide
    Like silent voices as the children cried

    Pain and fear by the pale moon light
    As the people watched in sight
    Like silent voices as the children cried
    Wishing for someone to be on their side

    As the people watched in sight
    Fire burning hot and bright
    Wishing for someone to be on their side
    The children cried out of fright

    Fire burning hot and bright
    Burning and blazing in the night
    The children cried out in fright
    But no one tried

    Burning and blazing in the night
    People screaming, families held tight
    But no one tried
    No help came by the pale moon light

    People screaming, families held tight
    Crystal eyes looking far and wide, but seeing nothing
    No help came by the pale moon light
    As the rain roared outside.

    Let the sun rise, all is done.







    Submitted on 2007-01-24 17:05:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      A very deep and dark poem. at times the rhyme scheme seemed a bit bit forced but and overall well flowing poem. some the the spacing and lines threw me off beat but like i said an overal good flow. kudos on a good write.

    ~Max
    | Posted on 2007-01-25 00:00:00 | by Max R. | [ Reply to This ]


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