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    Author: DontLetGo421
    Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 118/238/141
    Words: 42
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 1224
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    Description:
       NOT DONE. KINDA STRANGE BUT WHATEVV


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    dotsCHAOSdots
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    BENEATH THE SUMMERS SUN EVERYTHING SEEMED TO BE JUST RIGHT

    IT WAS ALL GOOD AND JOLLY BEFORE DECEMBERS FRIGHT

    THE TEMPERATURE BECAME YOUR PERSONA AND SOON WE DRIFTED APART

    RECALLING SPOKEN WORDS WRITTEN ALL OVER THOSE SILLY VALENTINES TARTS




    Submitted on 2007-01-24 17:40:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ok you just exsplained alot about my summer. wow, brought back mem's thanks,and no thanks lol
    | Posted on 2007-01-24 00:00:00 | by Mr.Ordinary | [ Reply to This ]


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