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    dots Submission Name: AGE CAN BLOW MEdots
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    Author: DontLetGo421
    Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 118/238/141
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
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    dotsAGE CAN BLOW MEdots
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    AGE CAN BLOW ME IT RUINS ALL MY LUCK

    EVERY BOY WHO COMES ALONG ASKING WANT TO FUCK.

    I SAY SUUURE. AND THINGS ARE GOING JUST FINE FINE FINE

    TILL THEY ASK MY AGE AND THEN THEY LEAVE ON THE DIME

    IF AGE WERENT AN ISSUE THEN ID BE WITH YOU BABY

    THEN WE COULD DO SOMETHING JUST A LITTLE BIT CRAZY

    IF AGE WERENT AN ISSUE THEN BABY ID BLOW YOUR MIND

    IF AGE WERENT AN ISSUE THEN BABY ID BE YOUR SILVER DIMMEEE




    Submitted on 2007-01-24 17:46:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      youll have plenty of time to love, cry and [censored] trust me love. but to the point, i liked it, made me angry for you lol minus the last end rhyme i raise my fist in defiance with you.
    | Posted on 2007-02-05 00:00:00 | by lark | [ Reply to This ]
      uhm..ook another point of view.....why do you care so much about your age anyway? enjoy it while you're young. having sex isn't everything you know...even if the people around you keep saying that they've had sex and it's the most amazing thing in the world doesn't mean you have to do it as well. and if you feel that if you aren't willing to have sex then boys won't like you, it's completely untrue. guys like that are [censored] jerks and unworthy of your attention.
    | Posted on 2007-01-24 00:00:00 | by Keller | [ Reply to This ]
      yeah... and jailbait sucks... cuz if age weren't an issue, maybe I'D blow your mind. hahaha
    | Posted on 2007-01-24 00:00:00 | by psyko | [ Reply to This ]
      aww i liked it, just got to face the fact that we're JAILBAIT!!
    </3 lisa
    | Posted on 2007-01-24 00:00:00 | by 777sacrites777 | [ Reply to This ]
      you know two good ones in a row, i know just how you feel kinda, cept my problem at that age was all the girls were dating older guy's lol
    | Posted on 2007-01-24 00:00:00 | by Mr.Ordinary | [ Reply to This ]


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