I actually enjoy the format you write in
I find it very origanel and one can read the write exactly as you have written it to feel all the emotion you conceal inside your words
In this write
I can feel the sadness trying to envelope your soul
I have fought that sadness for a very long time in my life
It wasnt until I started looking for and finding the Positive to every negative in my life that I started feeling better
Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
i like your format. very sylvia plath. so you are numb. hm. are you unable to feel are you not letting yourself feel? are you afraid of never again finding what you lost? or am i way of base? oh well. still like your format though. you repeat words a lot, but if thats what floats your boat, then rock on.