Power flaw by Mr.Ordinary

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Submission Name: Power flaw dots

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Author:	Mr.Ordinary
ASL Info:	18/m/ut
Elite Ratio:	3.32 - 58/82/35
Words:	45

Class/Type:	Poetry/Serious
Total Views:	151
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	337

Description:
this one has been a long time ini work but im not sure if it is quite done that will be up to you to decide.

Power flaw dots

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The elements of the chaos theory
falling apart,
time goes by,
nothing changes,
everyones free,
no one fights,
not even for what is right.

Here i am
left alone,
understanding it all,
but nothing changes,
no one fights,
not even for what is right.

Submitted on 2007-01-24 17:53:13 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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agreed

| Posted on 2007-01-29 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
im inclined to disagree. no one fights? false. no one fights about things that actually matter? true. everyone makes up these petty little problems so that they can have a reason to get pity from other people. its quite frankly ridiculous. but all of us do it anyway. anyway, nice write. provoking thought is always a good sign.

i tip my hat and bid thee farewell.
| Posted on 2007-01-26 00:00:00 | by PoeticNonsense | [ Reply to This ]

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