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    dots Submission Name: Just for nowdots
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    Author: Mr.Ordinary
    ASL Info:    21/M/Navy
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 64/102/41
    Words: 40
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 1109
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    Description:
       just a few thoughts o life as of recent, i hate stupid people.


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    dotsJust for nowdots
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    let me be free, let me be
    no more need to held on to me

    i must leave, let me be
    no need to follow me

    i love thee, i love thee
    but please just let me be




    Submitted on 2007-01-24 17:55:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      its short and sweet I like it..
    Candy (amanda)
    | Posted on 2007-02-27 00:00:00 | by allmine | [ Reply to This ]


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